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All Deviations
All Deviations


Across the gulf of time and space
Your voice reaches out,
Whispering, crying, laughing, sighing.



Touched by the music I have no choice but to respond,
Letting my own find its way back.



They pass each other in the void,
Our voices,
never touching.



Although their tenor differs,
There is a strain that touches,
Each at the other end.



What is touched quivers,
A tenuous familiarity.
Occasional contact becomes a conversation,
Kindred souls speaking a kindred tongue.



After a time I feel a longing grow,
Wishing that I could experience
More than the voice.



But I cannot cross the space,
You have yet to cross the time,
Across the gulf our voices touch,
The only thing that can.
©2008 ~Myrddyn
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~AngelGrewBlackWings:iconAngelGrewBlackWings: May 10, 2008, 1:55:48 PM
You have a good creative range, Arthur. I'm used to you writing more upbeat themes, but you did a very fine job here - this is a very beautiful, melancholy piece, and the ending is superb.

"Across the gulf our voices touch,
The only thing that can." - this was my favorite part.

While time and space can create a barrier, in the large scheme of things, they are both just illusions that are too inferior to keep apart anything real for too long. =)

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Don't curse the darkness; light a candle.
~Myrddyn:iconMyrddyn: May 10, 2008, 7:32:54 PM
In my philosophy time and space are actually illusions created by us so the we could experience what separateness is like. But we usually buy into the illusion which gives it power over us.

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First, know that your words have power. Over your environment, the people you meet, friends and family, and most especially, over you. Then realize that you have power over your words.
~Myrddyn:iconMyrddyn: May 10, 2008, 7:39:19 PM
Actually, a new thought just occurred. You mention that you are used to me writing in a more upbeat fashion which does speak about the way I am now, but I used to live in the melancholy realm.

I really appreciate how you understand so easily what I am trying to convey, by the way.

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First, know that your words have power. Over your environment, the people you meet, friends and family, and most especially, over you. Then realize that you have power over your words.
~AngelGrewBlackWings:iconAngelGrewBlackWings: May 23, 2008, 8:20:14 PM
I have experienced the melancholy realm much too often, but I think that it helps one to appreciate all the positive things that much more fully as a result of having gone through it.

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Don't curse the darkness; light a candle.
~Myrddyn:iconMyrddyn: May 24, 2008, 9:39:52 AM
I agree. Although I didn't enjoy those times as I was experiencing them I wouldn't change them. They have given me a depth of experience that enhances my life.

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First, know that your words have power. Over your environment, the people you meet, friends and family, and most especially, over you. Then realize that you have power over your words.
*thatIam:iconthatIam: May 26, 2008, 2:35:06 PM
quite visual ... quite nice!
~Myrddyn:iconMyrddyn: May 26, 2008, 2:44:19 PM
Thank you.

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First, know that your words have power. Over your environment, the people you meet, friends and family, and most especially, over you. Then realize that you have power over your words.