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Angel Among The Flowers by ~Myrddyn:iconMyrddyn:



Angel among the flowers

I lay back among the flowers
That match those in your hair
And feel the music created
That plays across my skin.

The instruments in the quartet
Working their perfect song
The sun, wind, your hair, and your touch
A tune ever so delicate.

I open my eyes to hold you
And I smile when I see
That clouds moving behind you
Have created lovely wings

I reach up and touch the flowers
That I’ve made for your hair
And compare you to an angel
That came down from the air.

I bend my body to touch you
Our lips meet in mid air
The sweetness that’s there to greet me
Brings an unbidden tear.

That I could live in this moment
Forever and a day
Holding and touching an angel
I’d feel I was in heaven
©2008 ~Myrddyn
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I put this as open because although this time I kept the number of syllables more structured I have no idea what kind of poem it would be.
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~AngelGrewBlackWings:iconAngelGrewBlackWings: May 23, 2008, 8:15:11 PM
I really like the imgery the line "feel the music created
That plays across my skin" conjures up. Also, one of my favorite lines is "I could live in this moment
Forever and a day." The whole poem is just beautiful. It has an air of pureness and carefree happiness which I really like. It's very sweet and leaves me with a warm feeling. :aww:

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~Myrddyn:iconMyrddyn: May 24, 2008, 11:57:10 AM
Thank you... I saw those wings in the sky yesterday...

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